Tuesday 5 July 2011

Term 2 - Narrative Writing


Princess Mya and the Fairy God Mother

A million years ago there lived a princess called Mya. Mya had a fairy god mother called Daisy. Daisy had found some new princesses to look after. Daisy had given all the princesses a wish except for Mya. Mya always wanted a wish but Daisy wouldn’t give her a wish. Mya thought she would get a wish on her birthday. When it came to her birthday she never got the wish and she cried and cried, "Oh please someone help me, I never got a wish". Daisy looked in her magic bubble. Daisy saw in her magic bubble that Mya was crying in her tower. So Daisy wanted to give Mya a wish, but she couldn’t because she had no more magic sand to make wishes. So Daisy flew to heaven to ask the Lord, "Can I use some of your magic sand because I’ve run out and I’ve got one more princess to give a wish to". "Ok then I would like you to give the princess three wishes" said the Lord in a big voice". "Ok then I will" said Daisy. So the Lord gave Daisy a bag of magic sand and Daisy said, "Thank you". "You’re welcome" said the Lord. Daisy flew her wings up and down like a bird and flew home. When she was home she sang a special song to make a wish and Mya wished for a prince, to be married and to be rich. Mya got her wishes but before she could get married she needed a ring so she went to get a ring for her and for Prince Morgan. When Mya showed Morgan the ring he said, "we will get married next week" and they did. They lived happily ever after.

By Mya

2 comments:

  1. Wow Mya,
    This is an awesome narrative story. I read it to my class and they loved it. Keep up the amazing mahi! xx
    Ms Tataurangi

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  2. Sarah McGrath, Ireland15 July 2011 at 09:26

    Beautiful story, well done!

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