Monday 8 July 2013

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Patrick the Outback Kangaroo


One beautiful morning in the Australian outback, Patrick the Kangaroo hopped out of bed with a spring in his step. He was so happy because he was going on a date with his girlfriend Laqueesha. He loved his girlfriend because she was as beautiful as a flower and as lovely as an angel.

Patrick put on his best tuxedo and went outside to get into the limo he had called for. Just before he hopped in the limo, he picked a red rose that was growing in his garden which reminded him of his girlfriend Laqueesha.

Patrick picked Laqueesha up from  her Pine tree house. He hid the red rose he had picked for Laqueesha behind his back and said, "this is for you". Laqueesha said "how romantic you are!" 

They jumped into the limo then the driver dropped them by a lake in the middle of nowhere. So they walked to a nice and quiet spot by the lake. There was a big tree with shade so they set up their picnic. After they ate lots of food they fell asleep. They slept for an hour. When Laqeesha woke up Patrick was.......gone!

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